>Posted a story online
>The reception was bad
I know for a fact I'm not a terrible writer but maybe I'm a terrible storyteller. This is very demoralizing. Maybe I should go back to painting.
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You need to learn from the criticism if you want to improve. Even low effort criticism often has worth.
Patently false. You need to qualify criticism before tajing it seriously; in this scenario if a person can't read or has a poor culture their opinion is worthless, moreso if you're markedly better than they are then their resistance is obstinacy toward a fatherfigure.
This, and recall that all you need to be succesful nowadays or ever is to put money behind your work by paying people to say it's nice. Simpleminded souls such as yourself; led by the lip through artificial peer influence, for the reasons you laid out, would praise to the heavens anything that came to you in that manner.
see above
agreed
unqualified
get a grip on yourself man
as ken doll
moron
c**t u wanna get stabbed c**t one liner c**t
i'll knife ur mum c**t, white paki gypo pikey
fuk off where u cum from poor bastard
moron.
I despise Americans.
also Black person if you're going to take criticism seriously, you should cut your throat as a fricking incel neet 4 all life,
WHAT HYPOCRISY
yon dissonance is fricking palpable
moron.
you had to go away and have a wank for two hours and that's all you managed to think of in response? you fricking fat foreheaded cripple you
moron.
cum handed american soiboi
moron.
jordan peterson sucks wiener for pills
>I know for a fact
Lmao at this delusion
Post excerpt or full story plz I'll be the totally fair judge
Why do I hate your face?
Serious question. It's like this with every man.
It’s not so much the face but the things surrounding it.
The earring. The bleached blonde hair. The flash-on selfie in the dark room.
You can tell a lot about this late millennial/elder zoomer just from these things.
Writing is a skill like any other you brainless moron, it only gets better the more you write.
Keep writing and improving and keep taking criticism and if you're second third and fourth books don't get better, only then do you have my permission to wallow in misery.
Based
Based
No you don't
No you didn't
Just try writing something else. Each time you write you should be a little less shit, assuming you're seeing what people are saying sucks about your work.
Post the story.
>painting
>writing
Wanker, get over yourself.
>"online"
dude... depending on where you post it the results would be extremely different. if it's royal road or some shit they dont give a toss about anything that isn't litrpg gamenomics ADD anime bullshit
Post link or it didn't happen.
kinda look like ryan gosling from this angle ngl
Not even slightly, don't you ever insult Goose like that again.
Man you couldn’t even make this green text interesting.
You will have to start somewhere. There is the certainty that the juvenalia or early work pales in comparison to something of extended mature length, provided that you are a good writer.
I am not going to make an exaggerated claim about what it means to be an artist in this age, what I can tell you though is that a great sacrifice must be made in your personal life. Have you no other profession to turn to? Do you have no satisfaction in any other field, regardless of efficiency? Is the thought of material satisfaction not enough for your daily desire? Are you willing to endure a long stint of poverty and lackluster conditions in the hope of attaining your dream? If you have answered these questions correctly, then you will find that writing is necessary for your existence.
I could list some figures of biographical worth here, such as Henry Miller who had not been successful in the craft until somewhere around his 40s. It is still possible to succeed in spite of stagnant years. The question is if you are willing to endure it
i won
Just remember you could plagiarize the best of the best in literature and if unnoticed the reception would be bad. Meanwhile Murakami is praised. Who gives a frick about criticism?
>Who gives a frick about criticism?
If only a handful of people read it and none of them like it, then what exactly was the point?
Youre supposed to write for the dead
The first stories I posted online got no reaction at all. None. Zero. I spent years trying to figure out what went wrong by myself. Stop being a b***h and be grateful you got any feedback.
Did you give up this fast while learning to walk?